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SFML projects / Re:creation - a top down action adventure about undeads

« on: January 23, 2016, 11:12:56 pm »

I can't add that much stuff based on your vision of my game.

understood

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SFML projects / Re:creation - a top down action adventure about undeads

« on: January 23, 2016, 07:57:03 pm »

Meanwhile I've been redrawing stuff in Undead Cafe.
Here's how it looks now:

i have some suggestions for the cafe:


- give this guy an animation doing something casual like cleaning glasses


- instead of square stools maybe you should have bar stools here (picture for reference below)



- instead of pillars maybe use hanging lamps/lanterns for light?


- maybe some jars/glasses/cups on the tables


- local sign, could maybe say "undead cafe" on it


- would be funny to see some cats waitering, highly unnecessary though

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SFML projects / Re:creation - a top down action adventure about undeads

« on: January 23, 2016, 06:55:20 pm »

Icecat, your new version looks better but you made the head bigger to match the hat and it looks wrong 

- smaller head
- tried to mimic Elias's style for shading
- robe got curvier from the bottom



attached attempt 3. feel free to use.
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SFML projects / Re:creation - a top down action adventure about undeads

« on: January 23, 2016, 06:42:21 am »

Unfortunately, your version looks like it is looking upwards, weirdly towards the high camera!

It seems to be correctly "pointed". However, it maybe should be wider and less high.

- attempted to fix the camera angle
- added a slight cut on the hat to make it more interesting
- used the exact same colors for outline and mustashe that Elias used
- trimmed the arms to make him appear less intimidating and static
- hat got slightly bigger



attached the 2nd attempt of straw hat guy. feel free to use as you wish.
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SFML projects / Re:creation - a top down action adventure about undeads

« on: January 22, 2016, 10:00:20 pm »

hey i tried to improve your straw hat guy:


- his hat seems less of a hat and more of a spike
- the sword on his back doesn't really add much to his character so i just removed it
- notice the feet? thats because in most asian cultures its mandatory to take off your shoes when indoors so i took that into consideration


- those 2 fire pillars should have shadows
- if this character still needs a sword, you could just make it walk towards the sword on the wall prehaps
- the dialogue says "show no empathy" but i think "show no mercy" would make more sense

anyway i attached my variation of the hat guy with this post. feel free to use it as you wish.
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